Here are (notable) changes I already anticipate in -07 based on the
ID nit checker:

diff draft-ietf-dnsext-axfr-clarify-06.txt \
draft-ietf-dnsext-axfr-clarify-07.txt

Clean up the ' ' in the reference anchors and add it to the "prose."
I should probably include the titles here.

139,142c139,142
< 1035, Section 4 ("MESSAGES") [RFC 1035], updated by the following
< documents: RFC3425 [RFC3425], RFC1996 [RFC 1996], RFC2136 [RFC2136],
< RFC2671 [RFC2671], RFC2845 [RFC2845], RFC2930 [RFC2930], RFC4035
< [RFC4035], RFC4635 [RFC4635]. In addition, one change is credited to
---
> 1035, Section 4 ("MESSAGES") [RFC1035], updated by the following
> documents: RFC 3425 [RFC3425], RFC 1996 [RFC1996], RFC 2136 [RFC2136],
> RFC 2671 [RFC2671], RFC 2845 [RFC2845], RFC 2930 [RFC2930], RFC 4035
> [RFC4035], RFC 4635 [RFC4635]. In addition, one change is credited to


I shrunk the reference anchor so I could thin the references (one space too
wide).

192c192
< QTYPE AXFR [DNS-VALUES]
---
> QTYPE AXFR [DNS-VALS]


Change a "MUST not" to a "MUST NOT"

222c222
< not contain the SOA resource record.
---
> NOT contain the SOA resource record.


Change a "MAY NOT" to a "can not"

271c271
< response as AXFR MAY NOT be retrieved recursively. A client MAY note
---
> response as AXFR can not be retrieved recursively. A client MAY note


Above mentioned anchor trimming.

288c288
< consult the appropriate IANA registry [DNS-VALUES].) If a client
---
> consult the appropriate IANA registry [DNS-VALS].) If a client


General thinning of the reference sections, new word wrapping, etc.

623,650c623,653
....(boring stuff to see)
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